Rewrite: "Tom's Diner" by Suzzane Vega
Introduction of the topic:
I’m going to write something about one of my favorite TV shows named “Miami Ink” which is played on the channel “travel & living”, and that is also one of my favorite channels. Just by the name of the show, you may not sure what it talks about. But you can easily realize that is happened in
The song:
I am sitting in the dark night.3
At the time of eleven o’clock.4
I am watching channel 20th. 5
For the show named “Miami Ink”. 6 7
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And the show’s played only an hour. 8
And before I’m already tired.9
It is starting at the eleven.10
When my Mom’s going to bed. 11 12
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”My name is Ami James”. 13
Says the man owns the shop. 14
To the audiences front the TV 15
They’re ready for the show. 16 17
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Ami introduces other members 18
And they are amazing tattoo artists 19
I’m staring every second 20
And don’t want to miss a thing 21 22
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And someone opened the door. 23
There’s a man with his wife 24
Who wants a tattoo about his son lovely 25
It was a story I can’t imagine26 27
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And I’m listening very carefully28
And eager for the story29
When he’s telling the story peacefully30
And so I feel shocked 31 32
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There was a trip one year ago 33
Not very long. Do I want to remember? 34
No I don’t want to remember at all35
Cause I killed my son is a terrible memory36 37
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When I was backing my car 38
That my son’s running after me 39
And while I’m feeling something’s wrong 40
My son’s dead because of me 41 42
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Oh, this wound will not disappear 43
Through many years after I’m telling you 44
To the memory of my son 45
I am coming for a tattoo... 46 47
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And I want a colorful dragonfly48
Once upon a time it used to be my son’s love... 49
He finished his story 50
It’s time to catch the tears 51 52
Da da da da...